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Thursday, December 2, 2021

Courage writing snapshot

 In class, I have been reading about Jesus christ's life and looking for acts of courage. I then had thirty minutes to write about it. 


I am writing about times in the bible when Jesus shows courage. He who is not courageous enough to take risks will accomplish nothing in life. (Muhammad Ali). Firstly, The easiest one to find where Jesus showed courage was when he died on the cross for us. I know that he shows courage here is because he's scared to die, but still does it for us. And this shows that he shows courage. because courage is doing something that you are scared of doing. 


Secondly, Another one where he shows courage is in the storm. When Jesus and his disciples were on a boat, they came past a wicked storm. the disciples were freaking out. So Jesus woke up and said ´where is your faith´. Then Jesus rebuked the winds and the waves. In this verse, Jesus shows courage by having faith and trust.


Thirdly,  When Jesus arrived at this village he saw a demon. The demon was trying to scare him but it did not work. So Jesus rebuked the demon and the demon came out of the body and ran away. In this one, Jesus showed courage by standing up and not being scared.


To sum up, Jesus is a good example of living courageously. Because when he's scared he still does it which shows a lot of courage.


Wednesday, November 17, 2021

What is courage?


Be courageous

In class, we are learning about courage. We had to choose a quote that we like and create a motivational poster about it.   I like this quote because it's very inspirational. Cause what this is telling you is to take risks and always try. So when people fail and you don't wanna take risks. You can think of courage.



Thursday, November 4, 2021

writing goal!!

 My Writing Goals 


Not yet

Developing

Got it! 


My story flows and I use punctuation for effect 

I have an interesting hook

I have good organisation (paragraphs help reader with the orientation, problem, complication, solution)

I have used , . ?!  correctly within direct speech

I have short sentences for impact and longer sentences to build detail

I have used wow words (verbs, adjectives, nouns)

I have figurative language ( simile, metaphor, idiom personification)

I mostly use show not tell 


I have a wide variety of  sentence starters

I have a 2A, double ly; de;de;  simile; verb, person sentence; 3 ed; emotion word, sentence; P.C sentence. ( comment on them)

I can give, and respond to, peer and teacher feedback to improve my work and my friend’s. 

My writing goals are...

My writing goals is to get better at everything.