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Wednesday, November 17, 2021

What is courage?


Be courageous

In class, we are learning about courage. We had to choose a quote that we like and create a motivational poster about it.   I like this quote because it's very inspirational. Cause what this is telling you is to take risks and always try. So when people fail and you don't wanna take risks. You can think of courage.



Thursday, November 4, 2021

writing goal!!

 My Writing Goals 


Not yet

Developing

Got it! 


My story flows and I use punctuation for effect 

I have an interesting hook

I have good organisation (paragraphs help reader with the orientation, problem, complication, solution)

I have used , . ?!  correctly within direct speech

I have short sentences for impact and longer sentences to build detail

I have used wow words (verbs, adjectives, nouns)

I have figurative language ( simile, metaphor, idiom personification)

I mostly use show not tell 


I have a wide variety of  sentence starters

I have a 2A, double ly; de;de;  simile; verb, person sentence; 3 ed; emotion word, sentence; P.C sentence. ( comment on them)

I can give, and respond to, peer and teacher feedback to improve my work and my friend’s. 

My writing goals are...

My writing goals is to get better at everything.