This is my report I wrote last week. was all about northland floods. I finished with a lot of words and sentences which was really good for me.but was it good.
Hi Khody, I enjoyed reading your blog post. I see you have kept your paragraphs abound main ideas. You MOSTLY stay in third person, but then mention your nan. Remember you could have said her name. When you read it out loud do you see sentences that need work? Looking forward to reading your next post.
Hi Khody, I enjoyed reading your blog post. I see you have kept your paragraphs abound main ideas. You MOSTLY stay in third person, but then mention your nan. Remember you could have said her name. When you read it out loud do you see sentences that need work? Looking forward to reading your next post.
ReplyDeleteYeah,.I was just writing in third person. but I didn't put my nan instead of her name.any other mistakes.
ReplyDeletethank you
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