riding in whatuwhiwhi

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First I started the bike and kept revving it hard to warm it up quicker, then I took off. , “Ahh watch out khody!” screamed” my sister puti”, You almost crashed into me she yelled. but I didn’t care so I carried on riding my dirtbike. a few minutes later I started skidding up the beach and made the sand look black. But if you want to know how to rip up the ground, you need to know how to ride properly.

On Saturday the 9th of October soon coming to the afternoon, I started learning to wheelie. because there’s this guy on youtube that I've been watching and he’s my favourite rider, he's good at doing knee knockers and scrapes easily. And he’s always out riding all the time and mean at long wheelies. and I  want to do some wheelies, so I’ve been learning ever since. The wheelie I’ve been practising is called a knee knocker and I’m learning real fast. My dad’s been giving me advice when I am practising, And it helped my wheelies get higher and higher. But before I do some wheelies , I have to start the bike up. One kick and she’s gone. My bike had a gassy smell to it but it went away.and my bike is red, black and white, and it's one fast bike.

A couple of hours later me maka, puti, and my dad went for a swim. But I got a bit scared because I saw a lot of dead sharks, but I still went in. At first, it was freezing, but a couple minutes later I got used to it. It was a nice sunny day and the best thing about the water is that the water was see-through. Man was it cool. then I jumped out and we had a barbecue. We were cooking steak, patties, sausages and some potato salad. It tasted so good that I went for more. The night was coming so we went back to my aunty’s house and slept in the tent. It was getting late so I decided to have asleep. But my mum, dad, aunty’s, uncles and papa’s were drinking all night.

In the morning all my family woke up cleaned my aunty’s house and took down the tents. when everyone was finished cleaning the aunty’s made breakfast. 2 hours later we were starting to pack up. After packing we boosted it home cleaned the car, washed the car and then we kicked back the rest of the day. It was the best day.